Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, July 22, 2013

Update: Getting Ready to Use Lucy Calkins Units of Study


I was excited and delighted when our school purchased the Lucy Calkins Units of study for us - so excited I posted a review on the blog that's been pretty popular, so I know y'all are pretty excited too. :) 

When we purchased the set, I was lucky enough to go to a workshop with Lucy. {Spoiler alert: it was amazing, I highly recommend it.} As a way to share our knowledge, my principal asked those of us who were part of the workshop to share our thoughts on implementing the Lucy Calkins curriculum. We spent a long while digging into the curriculum ourselves and found sooooo much great stuff, I thought I'd share some thoughts here! 




I think it's really important to "root" yourself in WHY you're doing something. This chapter (the whole book is great, but we're going for biggest "bang" for your buck, here) does a really good job of explaining some of the shifts for writing in the Common Core standards, and uses those shifts to really drive home how important writing instruction is in the classroom and throughout the school.

One of the things we discussed as a school team was the idea of protecting your time. Sometimes I feel like I  don't "protect" my writing time in the same way that I protect math, reading and science/social studies time. What I mean by that is that when there are interruptions, I'm far more likely to bump writing and make sure I get to the other subjects. We talked about making our school rule something along the lines of - "I will commit to direct instruction in writing just as often as I have direct instruction in math and reading." Boom. Move writing on up that list. 


I'm telling you, this series is a wealth of knowledge. One of the things that I love are the rubrics, exemplars and continuums. Having a common "bar of excellence" is so important for norming across classrooms and even across grade levels. I recommend "tabbing" {I used post-its, but I'm sure you can come up with something cuter} each of these resources for each of the different types of writing {informational, opinion and narrative}, so you'll have it to refer to late. I've included a brief description of each below. 



The learning progression explains how kids should progress from K to sixth grade {imagine that} in each of the rubric areas {overall, lead, transitions, ending, organization, elaboration, craft, spelling and punctuation}. Super helpful for identifying where kids are and what they need to learn next.


Each type of writing has an on-demand prompt that you can use for pre- or post- assessment. They are general enough to be used as many times as needed - and you don't have to think them up! {HALLELUJAH}


There's also a student checklist for each type, with the standards for that grade level. I love that ALL grade levels are included in this book, because I know I'll have kids above and below grade level. I plan on laminating these for my kids to keep as a reference. That way when it's time to conference with me for the final time, I'll have them self-check and tell me if their checklist lines up with what I think about that writing piece, and I'll know if they're understanding how to develop each row on their rubric.


PERFECT for using as an exemplar as we write. I know I'll be storing these either on my computer to project, or possible in hard copy to refer to as we write.


Teacher-created exemplars are a really neat idea. Basically they took the same topic/prompt for each of the three type of writing, and wrote exemplars for every grade level and annotated how each section of the rubric was shown in that piece of writing. So, there's a persuasive piece about football at recess written as the "perfect" K, 1, 2 ... through 6th grade sample. That way we know what to look for in every piece. LOVE IT.



The CD is awesome. It has so many resources - they're all in the book, but they're conveniently in one place where I can print from my computer and/or project without having to lug the book around and scan it.


You also HAVE to have the CD to access the online resource, which I think is interesting.


Resources are organized by type OR by unit of study.





Now it's time to dig in to the real "meat" - the units of study. It'd be crazy to think you could read each one, but a quick perusal will be helpful. I think one of the most important sections is located right inside the front cover of each book. It's a description of each of the three "bends" for each unit as well as a list of what each part of the lesson will focus on.




Okay, okay. I know. It will feel silly. But seriously - if you don't actually TEACH it, how will you know what works and what doesn't?  It's also important to know that the Lucy Calkins books aren't necessarily in a scripted format. They're more narrative, so if you don't try it out, you won't know what feels right and what feels forced. So I straight up sat down in my living room and "taught" my puppy a lesson, just to see how well prepared I was, based on my initial read. It went ... okay. :) I'll get better! 

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SO! There you have it - five steps to implementing the Units of Study in your class. Leave me a note about how you're using this awesome resource! 





Wednesday, May 29, 2013

A Review of Lucy Calkins' Units of Study for Writing Workshop

* Update: After you read this, head here for Five Steps to Implementing Lucy Calkins! *

When some of my colleagues and I attended Lucy Calkins' writing workshop in March and found out there was a NEW writing curriculum being published, we crossed our fingers and toes that we could get this curriculum for our writing instruction ... and we did! {WOO HOO!!} 

                       

See, I don't know about you but I found the old K-2 set a little tough to use - by the time my students got to my classroom they either a) had heard it all before or b) the curriculum was too young for them. The new set has a different set of FOUR units for every grade level! The other reason we were hoping for the new units was that we felt, as a team, our writing instruction was suffering because we didn't have a {rigorous and Common Core-aligned} school-wide sytem of rubrics and exemplars on which to base our teaching {like we have in other subjects}. It was holding our kids back from writing at the highest level. It was a no-brainer. This was needed. 

So then we waited for what seemed like forever {until May}. The units finally, finally came in on the last day of school, and I've spent the last couple of days tucked up on the couch "digging in" to some professional development. {What, everyone doesn't anxiously await their summer break so they can ... read more about teaching?! LOL!}

Here's a quick list of three things I love:
  1. Rubrics that span grades K-6 so I can push or remediate my kids based on what they need. 
  2. Student exemplars so my kids have authentic examples of what their writing should look like. 
  3. In-depth mini-lessons that really TEACH my kids to refer back to mentor texts as examples of what great writers do. 
A few visuals of the things I love:





And finally ... my first-ever VIDEO overview of the curriculum. It's a little silly but I think it gets the point across. :) 




So ... do you implement a writing workshop or use Lucy Calkins? Thinking about purchasing or using this curriculum? Let me know what you think!

* Update: After you read this, head here for Five Steps to Implementing Lucy Calkins! *

Tuesday, April 23, 2013

ENERGY! Kinetic. Potential. Light. Heat. Motion ... And Beyond!

WHEW! We have finished our big energy unit, and I'm delighted with how it turned out {and it's up on TpT for you to use, if you're looking for some energy fun!}. The kids really got into sources of energy, types of energy - and we had some fun integrating reading and writing all the way through.

We started with hula-hooping, of course. {way back when I had the old header, remember?}  - We talked about kinetic and potential energy, and how we transferred energy from our bodies to the hoop!



We learned about several different types of energy, like light, heat, motion, gravitational, electric and chemical, and searched through several magazines to find different types of energy. We even discovered that energy can take multiple forms!


Soon we took things up a notch by learning about the Law of Conservation of Energy. We read a non-fiction passage {included in the unit on TpT} and made a quick anchor chart ...



Then began crafting our energy chains, to show the transfer of energy from one thing to another!



Then we started wondering ... how do we even know energy is out there? We can't see or feel it, most of the time. Enter ... ENERGY DETECTIVES! 


 I gave the kids bags with several items that related to one another (i.e. a sleepover). The kids had to use their inferencing skills to figure out a) what activity was being described, and b) why those items proved the existence of different kinds of energy. The kids had a blast, and then they created their own energy mystery bags! :)



Finally {we actually completed this project throughout the energy unit, but I think it'd be a great culminating activity}, we worked on some problem-based learning projects to sum-up what we know about energy. There were two different (differentiated) problems. First, the President of the Energy committee contacted our class with a unique problem ... 


What should we do? Create public service announcements, of course! The kids had to read a non-fiction passage {included in the unit}, and persuade their peers that kinetic (moving) energy is better for their bodies than potential {stored} energy.

It was a great way for them to practice more persuasive writing, AND they had the choice of how to do it. Several kids chose to write a script for a commercial, but many chose a poster. Here are a couple examples of their adorable work ...


The other group had a slightly more complex task - they were contacted by the President of the Energy Committee about the problems we're having with energy sources that pollute the earth. They were asked to pick an energy source, read a non-fiction passage {included}, complete a Web Quest, and design a persuasive PSA recommending more or less use of that particular energy source. They were also given choices of their presentation style. Here are two excerpts from their PowerPoint and cartoon presentations.







They did a great job, and I'm so proud! We had a GREAT time learning about energy, and integrating several other reading and writing skills into our work as well!

If you're interested in purchasing this unit, you can pick up the bundled resources here. The resources for this unit, sold separately, include:



Thanks for stopping by! 

Saturday, March 16, 2013

Editing Notebooks: An Intervention Strategy

I have a couple of students whose writing just isn't where I want it to be at this point in the year. Different issues with different students, but the end result is that they just aren't creating the AMAZING products that they're capable of.

While working with a couple of teammates the other day, we started thinking about what could prompt our students to see their own mistakes. One of my teammates ran across this reading log self-assessment from the fabulous "Life in 4B," and I had just seen the wonderful Hope King's color-coded editing.


Reading Log Assessment from Life in 4B

We thought that the checklist might be an awesome way to focus our kids on what they need to do, and color-coding could make it fun, but we still needed it to have some collectible data. I'm not always the best at collecting RTI data regularly (I'm great with class assessments, but for some reason tracking other things get moved to the back burner), so I knew I needed something easy to see and use, and if possible - I'd LOVE it to be in one place.

Thus -- the editing journal was born!


It's got a cute cover, a pocket for holding colored highlighters {tied to the notebook with string - losing markers won't keep us from editing, no sir!}, an introduction page ...




... editing checklist, write/edit tabs AND {WOOHOO!} a little tab across every page for me to record all the D-A-T-A. After one week of entries, there's even a little graph for my student to record their progress through the week!



I'm SOOoO excited to get this started next week. Fingers crossed we see some BIG improvements! 

I'm hoping this also might come in handy for some other teachers out there in the Internet Machine-land. Pop over to my TpT store for the freebie!  I included a fully editable set for those of you who'd like to change the goals or customize the letter. Enjoy! 

Wednesday, March 13, 2013

Show, Don't Tell

Y'all ... a dream I didn't even know I had came true this week! I saw Lucy Calkins ... you know ... the inventor of Writer's Workshop? Yeah, her. I spent a full day in her amazing, fascinating, fabulous professional development as we talked about teaching kids to write informational, narrative and opinion writing pieces.

I went with four other wonderful women from my school, and we all had high hopes for the workshop {the words "life" and "changing" were thrown around a lot ...}. Lucy didn't disappoint! She was candid, to the point, and gave awesome tips. One thing I thought was really interesting was her thoughts on the Common Core. Among other things, she emphasized that writing is much more thoroughly woven into our reading standards than it has been in the past.

Most importantly, a full three standards - across grade levels - are dedicated to reading like a writer. Meaning, noticing the word choice, imagery, and decisions writers made as they wrote, and how those decisions affected the reader.

Internally I gave a little {wahoo!!!}, because literally the NEXT day I was coming in to begin my "Show, Don't Tell," unit with my kids - focusing on kids making inferences and writing so that their readers can make inferences from the text, to determine a character's feelings and character traits. All wrapped up in a game of CHARADES!

 First we learned how to show, not tell, comparing some passages together (I always project on the board). Then I gave them some "telling" passages to act out, the point being that if you watch someone do something, you'll have a lot more ideas as to how to describe their feelings/traits in with their actions and words than if you just tried to imagine it.

Telling: Jake was hungry for pancakes. Showing: "Jake rolled out of bed; he didn't even take time to put on his fuzzy bunny slippers. After walking out the food, he sniffed the air. "Hmmm," he said. "Smells like pancakes. I can't wait!"

Telling: Carrie was scared to try riding the bike. Showing: Carrie walked down the tall stairs, and pulled her rusty bike off the hook on the wall with shaking hands. She stared at it for moment, but all she could imagine was falling on the ground. Slowly she walked away. 
The kids LOVED being little actors, and they liked even more when Ms. BBZ was the first "actor" to take the stage. I acted out {like a fool!}, "Jake was hungry and wanted pancakes for breakfast." BORING! So we did a little "air writing" in partners (thanks, Lucy, for the tip!!), and came up with some awesome writing (see above)!

After doing a little practice together, we brought out the game of charades! The kids drew a card, and acted the "telling" passage on it. Then their partner write a "showing" passage to describe what the actor did!



They came up with some pretty adorable work ... {spelling errors and all!}  

Jeff crawled out of his cozy, warm bed clutching his grumbly, bumpy stomach. He stepped down the wooden stairs. Smelling cold air, "Mmmm," he said. "Mom!" 

Jake went down the long stairs, in his pink bunny slippers. He was so so hungry, then he sniffed the hair and smelled pancakes. "I love pancakes," he said. Then her ran into the kitchen and ate them all. He didn't even save any for his mom. 

If you're interested in using this unit, check out my TpT store for the entire unit.

 In the mean time, enjoy the following freebie!- print, cut out and attach these paddles to sticks - any time you're doing a read-aloud your kids can hold up "showing!" when they hear a passage with great language, and "telling!" when they hear a boring passage. :)



Click here to download the freebie {from Google Docs}. Enjoy, and thanks for stopping by!


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